dave22's Journal, 08 August 2008

If words had great taste I'd feast on them daily
just like the oul great kings of yore.
I'd banquet on journals, devour messages gaily
and gorge till me tummy was sore.

Some entries are low carb succinct and precise
which always seems just fine to me.
While others are meaty and often read twice
before the true message we see.

Ohhh theres many a mean caller like Tom or aunt flo
not forgettin' oul Bertie the bloat.
All sent here from hades to try us, you know
every ready to snigger and gloat.

But thats why we have buddies sent from heaven above
to keep us inspired every day.
Their words drip with kindness and flow with such love
they mean more than we ever can say.

So smile and feel good as the weekend draws near
a chance to rest and renew.
May temptation be banished along with all fear
and may the Good Lord bless each one of you.


Well what did ya expect? Poetry!!! (and I never used the word 'feckin' once!!)

Have a great weekend all....xx

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Aww, Dave, you're a wordsmith! Very nice, thanks for writing it and THANK YOU for all the support you give you everyone. BTW, I didn't get to see the cowbat hat! 
08 Aug 08 by member: kimbulie
*Huggles*..Will pop the cowboy hat pic back up kim... thing is, I look like an awful plonker altogether as I am just terrible with photos and always have a face which reseambles a constipated bulldog after licking wee off a thorny thistle!!! but for you..... 
08 Aug 08 by member: dave22
You look like John Wayne himself! So cool. Glad you finally got it, I never thought you were serious when you said you wanted one! You look fine by the way, not like a bulldog at all. 
08 Aug 08 by member: kimbulie
Well... iffin we were responding any quicker to each other - we'd be on the phone! *s* Have a sublime weekend kim...next stop for you is the 170's and the ocean waves! (have you told us where you are cruising around?) 
08 Aug 08 by member: dave22
I have Dave, 2 stops in the Bahamas and then Key West. It's only a 4 day one. Wait til I tell ya'll about the one in Feb! Sorry, I was typing my journal so I'm sure I didn't respond nearly as quickly on this one. You have a great weekend too, glad the fam's home for ya! 
08 Aug 08 by member: kimbulie
Another one in Feb!!!! you darn well ARE a Hollywood socialte - arn't ya! grins... 
08 Aug 08 by member: dave22
YOU crack me UP!!!! Thanks for the giggles this morning :P I LOVE a man in a cowboy hat!!!  
08 Aug 08 by member: Keri15
We should have something equivalent to the Pulitzer Prize on fatsecret so we could award it to the most entertaining journals. You definitely deserve one for today! Thanks for bringing a smile to my face :) 
08 Aug 08 by member: evelyn64
you are so creative and cute...your wife is one lucky lady...have a great day and cheer for the bengals... 
08 Aug 08 by member: veggies yuk
Oh Davey, You are so missed on the weekend when the sweet cravings are the worst...when will you get that internet get put in the backwoods????? 
08 Aug 08 by member: sharonfriz
Good point sharon.... I will phone them today, I paid them weeks ago for it, they said that there was a lead time but Mother of Divine intervention...we must be near that by now... thanks for the heads up! 
08 Aug 08 by member: dave22
Oh, thank you! Your poem was wonderful - really captured the FS experience. And the award goes to........ DAVEY! Yaaayyyy!!!!  
08 Aug 08 by member: amryk
Heh heh heh, I like it.  
08 Aug 08 by member: Zucchiki
Thats so awesome. You must be a writer or something because whenever I read your journals they are humorous, interesting and well worded. Have a great weekend. 
08 Aug 08 by member: ImLuuvd
eh- i've heard better.;> 
08 Aug 08 by member: gearhead
awwwwwwwwwwww! so sweet! And hilarious too!! Looks like you've had quite an educational experience here learning about TOM, FLO, Bertie etc.!! You should write a book sympathizing about the female-plight from a male perspective!!!!!! LOL!  
08 Aug 08 by member: 08willbegreat
What a great way to end our week! Once again, you made me actually LOL! Have a great weekend with the family! See you next week! 
08 Aug 08 by member: katrinat
WOW....Davy, you definitely missed your calling! You should be making a living writing poetry! Have a great weekend my friend :) 
08 Aug 08 by member: mbhpro
Oh Davey, Davey. Once again, you've enlivened our sometimes serious hearts. How funny are you? You MAY just be as cool as I am this weekend!! 
09 Aug 08 by member: Paige E
Your wife is going to get you when she finds that you are charming all of the ladies here. A man of words and HOT!!! too. 
09 Aug 08 by member: juanab

     
 

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